STORYBOARD CHANGES

From our first ideas to our final storyboard we made a lot of alterations as we had to ensure our trailer clearly showed the narrative. 

From our first ideas we realised the trailer needed shots to really show the division between teenagers and the rest of the world. 

We put in a scene of a mother handing out pieces of cake to young children at cake sale. A teenager comes to take a piece and the mother refuses to give it to her. We quickly realised this scene had many flaws.

 We changed it to a scene in a park where a teenager is skating. A mother and her child are playing on a slide and when the mother sees the teenagers tension rises. She hurriedly gets her child and rushes out the park with her. On the way out she tells the teenager they do not belong in the park. This scene will show the audience that teenagers are being completely isolated from the rest of society and there is fear amongst the citizens.